Felix Global Moderator
Posts : 221 Join date : 2010-06-22 Location : If I told you then you wouldn't be around anymore
Character sheet Name: Felix Pyre Affiliation: Celestial Dragons (Konohagakure) Rank: Sage (S)
| Subject: Summoning: Celestial Dragons Mon Jul 19, 2010 12:21 pm | |
| Summoning InformationPact: Celestial Dragons Nature: Lightning Chief: AuRel Members Nature: Nature(sage?)/Lightning Name: AuRel Age: 597 Physical Appearance: https://i.servimg.com/u/f31/14/61/91/73/dragon11.jpg" border="0" alt=""/> Personality: AuRel is a very honorable dragon, he is father of AuRon, RuGuuard and Wistala as well as chief of the Dragons. His mate died many years ago, because of this he is very defensive of his children even though they are considered adult dragons. He is often very perceptive when faced with a question; never making his judgment before reviewing all the facts. Nature: Lightning Name: AuRon Age: 222 Physical Appearance: Personality: AuRon is a courageous young dragon, though he does have a habit of charging in first and then asking questions. Even though RuGuuard is his brother, he considers him his rival. AuRon is the Strongest of the three siblings. Nature: Lightning Name: Wistala Age: 222 Physical Appearance: https://i.servimg.com/u/f31/14/61/91/73/wistal10.jpg" border="0" alt=""/> Personality: Wistala or Tala as she prefers is very smart, often preferring to read (She taught herself to read human text and yes she prefers hardback books to paperbacks because they are easier for her to use without destroying the pages.) She is the fastest flier of the three dragon siblings almost surpassing AuRel. Nature: Lightning Name: RuGuuard Age: 222 Physical Appearance: https://i.servimg.com/u/f31/14/61/91/73/storm_11.jpg" border="0" alt=""/> Personality: RuGuuard is a ruthless dragon, obsessed with finding new power. He is the most focused of the three siblings Though his brother AuRon considers them rivals, he sees it as nothing more than a childish game and refuses to involve himself in it. Pact-techniques: - Spoiler:
(Didn’t known if I needed to make this an entire new tech but the dragons communicate with a form of telepathy, though it sounds like a regular voice, so much so, that those unfamiliar with it mistake it for one.) Type: Ninjutsu Nature: Lightning Rank: A Rank Class: offensive/defensive Name: Lightning Release: Sixteen Pillar Bind Description: A more powerful version of Lightning Release: Four Pillar Bind, the user creates sixteen giant pillars, which then form a giant oven-like structure to trap the enemy. Once the enemy is trapped in the oven-like box, lightning would shoot out towards them. It is used after Earth Release: Sticky Earth Drop to cover the enemy in mud and then followed by Fire Release: Fired Pottery Technique, creating flames inside the oven to roast and harden the mud, immobilizing the enemy. Limitations: 1 post use/3 post cooldown/ 3 post set up User(s): AuRel, Wistala
Type: Ninjutsu Nature: Lightning Rank: B Class: offensive/defensive Name: Lightning Release: Four Pillar Bind Description: Four giant rock pillars are summoned around the enemy, then shoot bolts of lightning, immobilizing the target and possibly doing damage to them. Limitations: 1 post use/ 2 post cooldown User(s): AuRel, AuRon, Wistala, RuGuuard
Type: Ninjutsu Nature: Lightning Rank: S Class: offensive collaboratively Name: Limelight Description: This jutsu is depicted as the strongest of all Lightning jutsu in existence. The incredible destructive power of this jutsu can reduce an entire Hidden Village and everyone within the area to nothing but ash. Shien has referred to it as a way of Smiting, similar to what Gods themselves do to the unworthy, sometimes seireitou also refers to this as well. This jutsu requires 4 highly-skilled ninja to use it to stand in a cardinal formation. The area in which to be affected by this jutsu depends on how far the formation is spread out. The formation can stretch as far as an entire castle. The extremely large amount of chakra used will drain the users of almost all their chakra.
Limitations: This Jutsu lasts for one posts and takes three turns to set up, It is Felix’s Job to keep the opponent distracted while the dragons set this up. Four post set up. User(s): AuRel, AuRon, Wistala, RuGuuard
Type: Senjutsu/Taijutsu Nature: Rank: S Class: offensive/defensive Name: Dragon’s Might Description: After entering sage mode Felix’s fighting style is greatly altered making it resemble a varience of Southern Dragon style kung-fu. Because of the application of nature chakra, his attacks are given an unseen range boost so much so that a seeming missed hit can still knock back an opponent. Limitation: This is almost second nature to AuRel and he can maintain it almost indefinitely, but every five posts he must stop to gather nature chakra. [This also leaves him greatly fatigued so that after two uses in one thread he must retreat back to his home to rest.] User(s): AuRel
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Kiri no Kami Hachidaime Mizukage
Posts : 637 Join date : 2010-06-21 Age : 32 Location : Kirigakure, most likely.
Character sheet Name: Matsuda Shingen "Kiri no Kami" Affiliation: Kirigakure Rank: Mizukage
| Subject: Re: Summoning: Celestial Dragons Mon Jul 19, 2010 2:22 pm | |
| 1) The Sixteen Pillar Binding seems over-powering, especially since it uses more then twice the amount of pillars used in its basic form. Please lower it to eight pillar binding, at least then it simply doubles the original pillar binding.
2) Limelight should take at least four turns to set up, since it is a very destructive technique.
Otherwise, I don't see very many problems. I'll take another look when the changes are made. | |
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Felix Global Moderator
Posts : 221 Join date : 2010-06-22 Location : If I told you then you wouldn't be around anymore
Character sheet Name: Felix Pyre Affiliation: Celestial Dragons (Konohagakure) Rank: Sage (S)
| Subject: Re: Summoning: Celestial Dragons Mon Jul 19, 2010 2:25 pm | |
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Kiri no Kami Hachidaime Mizukage
Posts : 637 Join date : 2010-06-21 Age : 32 Location : Kirigakure, most likely.
Character sheet Name: Matsuda Shingen "Kiri no Kami" Affiliation: Kirigakure Rank: Mizukage
| Subject: Re: Summoning: Celestial Dragons Mon Jul 19, 2010 2:27 pm | |
| Ahh, alright. Makes sense then. Have you made the change for Limelight? | |
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Felix Global Moderator
Posts : 221 Join date : 2010-06-22 Location : If I told you then you wouldn't be around anymore
Character sheet Name: Felix Pyre Affiliation: Celestial Dragons (Konohagakure) Rank: Sage (S)
| Subject: Re: Summoning: Celestial Dragons Mon Jul 19, 2010 2:28 pm | |
| Yep I just have to fix it in my character app | |
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Kiri no Kami Hachidaime Mizukage
Posts : 637 Join date : 2010-06-21 Age : 32 Location : Kirigakure, most likely.
Character sheet Name: Matsuda Shingen "Kiri no Kami" Affiliation: Kirigakure Rank: Mizukage
| Subject: Re: Summoning: Celestial Dragons Mon Jul 19, 2010 2:29 pm | |
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